Meteor Fall

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  1. Coyowl

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    Hello guys!

    I am new to Buildbox and I am really happy to be part of this wonderful community.
    After a month and a half I completed my first game called Meteor Fall!

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    Meteor Fall is a minimal arcade runner in which you need to destroy planets to score points. Tap the screen to change direction and avoid the asteroids. There are five unique stages filled with different obstacles and randomised levels. Over 20 different characters to unlock with coins.
    Check out the trailer!



    Currently looking for a publisher.

    Thank you for reading!
    Kozax
     
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  2. playsgames6666

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    Looks good.
    Personally i would remove the flash, lots of users hate it.
    But otherwise the game and design look awesome.
    good luck with it.
     
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  3. heathclose

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    looks cool, is it that fast to begin with? and ya flash gets an uninstall from me, but I feel light, so, your mileage may very
     
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  4. Coyowl

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    Thank you for your feedback!
    The game is getting faster with every stage! I was actually thinking about removing the flashes :)
     
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  5. Machine Rises

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    I recommend making those rounded rectangular light rays more transparent, or darker. They are the same color as your character and distract from the character. Just making them blend in with the background more will make your character pop and put focus where it should be.
     
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  6. Coyowl

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    Thank you very much for your input. I will work on it :)
     
  7. wesam_badr

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    I Am also recommend to make the character a little smaller and like machine rises said make the light rays blend into the background why not make it neon like that will give more depth to the game. otherwise it look great.
     
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  8. trudnai

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    Looks really cool except the flash. I would also make a little bit more apparent what to catch and what to avoid, otherwise really like it!
     
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