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  1. Deliverbo

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    ( Removed Game )


     
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    the art direction in this game is really impressive...
     
  3. Nihat

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    I downloaded and tried your game. I couldn't determine platforms, the color of platforms and backgrounds cannot be differed . There are too much things and that is why i died a few times then i understood that different shapes that appear suddenly are decorations. Also platforms are less visible than enemies.
     
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    Hi, I have reviewed your game.
    It looks smooth and clean.
    The only drawback is the size (40Mb).
    Please review music, repeated images, images that do not use.
    The ideal is to have 1, 2 or 3 Atlasses, you have more than 10.
     
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    What voice does everyone else read @jcalle posts in?
     
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    i don't know why, but Virgil from thunderbirds. :p
     
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    Tyvm heathclose
     
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    Yes some shapes are there to distract you :)
     
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    Hi Jcalle hows everything? Thanks for reviewing the game. I pretty much need all the audio and images so im not sure how to make the game smaller. And you are right there is 12 atlasses in the game. Did you get to the lighting storm stage in level 3?
     
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    have you searched the forum for posts about image size best practices?
     
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    Creative artwork.
     
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    Beautiful artwork. Nice
     
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    tyvm. I use inkscape to create artwork. With practice anyone can make nice artwork :)
     
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    Really love the aesthetics in this game!
     
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    Ty. How long was your game in the top charts?
     
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    About two days...
     
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    What I learned is apple gives all new apps a boost in the beginning. So the fact it dropped significantly in the charts is normal. You should promote your game now. What promotional ideas do you have?
     
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    I'm working with a team who is going to be doing all the promoting. They aren't really publishers but I think they can take it to the top. Hopefully :)
     
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    That sounds good. And remember you can always add more and more elements to your game. Although I thought the original 1.0 version of Cloud Rider was the complete final version, in just about a month and a half I've added plenty more elements to the game. I'm much happier with the current version :)
     
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    How are things going with your promotion team?
     

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