Ninja Bunny Hop

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  1. AaroArts

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    Hello.

    Just got a new game approved today. The game is called Ninja Bunny Hop.
    The idea is to jump and avoid all incoming ninja stars.

    It's a simple game, but I think it looks pretty cool.
    This is my first attempt at creating pixel art too :p

    View on App Store here:

    https://itunes.apple.com/gb/app/ninja-bunny-hop/id1202950785?mt=8

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    I hope you like it :)
     
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    it look great nice game
     
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    Why didn't you pitch it to the publisher?
     
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    Nice.. one suggestion: I think you should make the Ninja Stars much bigger and a Grey color. I almost didn't even notice what you were jumping over.
     
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    Nice game, all the best.
    i agree with Aaron, the obstacles could stand out more.
    But its good....
     
  7. AaroArts

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    Thanks :)

    Thank you.
    I See what you mean looking back at it now.
    Thanks for the feedback, it's much appreciated. I will definitely take it on board :)

    My games aren't good enough yet to be published by a publisher.
    So self-publish until I make a game I feel is better and different from anything that's already out there.
     
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    Hey @Sam, game looks pretty, but I think you need to add some variation to it. I just downloaded it and played it for about, 5 minutes and found it too repetitive. I get very bored, very quickly, with one-tap games that have just one single thing to do and the same jump over and over again, just doesn't give me any incentive to stay in the game.

    Just some constructive criticism on your gameplay that's all. You've definitely got the design-chops, as all your games look great, but I doubt this app will have any retention.
     
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    Thank you Phill:)
    I always welcome constructive criticism. It's how we grow.

    Since I've been playing more than testing I have also noticed this.
    I'm going to have a think over the weekend and see if I can introduce something new.

    Thanks again :D
     
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